jani bondhu hridoye keno baje tomar oi krondon dhoni,
eo jani ekda tumi i to chile mor sab kichu ,
mor moner poros, hridoyer aprokashito dhoni
Toma hote dure thaki ei to tomar kosto
se nai ba bolle mukhe ,biswas koro ami seta jani
karon, tomar amar hridoy je ekhanni…
sudhu ekhanniii.
ANUPAM DAS
Uporer duto comments er mane thik bujhlam na, bodh hoi ai gulo kobita akare thakle valo lagto.
valo legeche lekhati, tabe 2nd pera te duto expression ache, tai oikhane jadi akta ! athoba ? thakto tahole hoito duto expression aro valovabe mone dhore jeto….tobe kobitati asadharan.
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jani bondhu hridoye keno baje tomar oi krondon dhoni,
eo jani ekda tumi i to chile mor sab kichu ,
mor moner poros, hridoyer aprokashito dhoni
Toma hote dure thaki ei to tomar kosto
se nai ba bolle mukhe ,biswas koro ami seta jani
karon, tomar amar hridoy je ekhanni…
sudhu ekhanniii.
ANUPAM DAS
Sedin Jano tomar kotha sunte pelam ghumer ghore
asto ratri jege chilem sudhu tomake mone kore,
koto betha peyechi jano,
hisab rakho tar…
Kiba hobe hisab rekhe ,kosto jokhon amar,
jano tumi ei prithibir bokara keno hase
sab kichute abak lage, tai krondoneteo hasi
tai to sudhu ami tader, taderi bhalo basi
taderke bad dile, ami sudhu tomai bhalo basi.
Apurbo se prem jano,
nodir dharai boi,
khonjh rekhecho kon se nodi apon bege boi
mone korai tomar kotha ,tomar bhalo basa
tomar amar moner koner apokrasito asa
kobita amar holo sesh ,mone roilo asa
ei bhabei bakto korlam amar bhalo basa.
Uporer duto comments er mane thik bujhlam na, bodh hoi ai gulo kobita akare thakle valo lagto.
valo legeche lekhati, tabe 2nd pera te duto expression ache, tai oikhane jadi akta ! athoba ? thakto tahole hoito duto expression aro valovabe mone dhore jeto….tobe kobitati asadharan.
Anabadda legeche lekhati. Ses charte line asamanya.
Truely awesome….encouraging you to write more like this..
so that you can express your emotions…be it happiness.. be
it sorrow.
apnar lekhata besh mon chuNye geylo… onto mil ditey giye ektu adhtu somjhota koreycheyn… tobu chobi ta dhoreycheyn sundor… bhalo laga janiye geylam
bhalo…kintu kichu kotha byabohar kora hoyeche…ja akhun kobitaye lekha hochhena….
aamaar mon-ey hoyechhe antyomil-Taa nitaantoi inconsequential… kobita-Ti mon chhuNye jaay, seTaai aasol kathaa… bhaalo laaglo poRe.
ANANDA APNAR KOBITATA AMAKE KHUB ANANDA DIECHE…PROTITA LINE E MON CHHUNYE GECHE…SATTI E EKTA ANOBODDO LEKHA…
nice ………