Expression is very weak but the concept and idea has really touchy.A poet always lives with his surroundings.You will shine.I see a new Shukanto in side you.Hope to see your more poems in Palki.
Myegh,khide ki jinis ta ami khub bhaloi bujhi…se avigyata amar achhe.’khudar rajye prithibi godyomoi’…ei quotation jhere tou sabai cholte pare na.aar ekta vikhiri chheleke ghare niye asbo…take snan ba porasona korabo,athocho khete debo na…emon bhabna…ki jani baba,amar tou kakhonoi ase ni…
kobita lekhar koushal ta thik ki,ami jani na…ekhono atota kausali hoye uthte parini aarki…ami likhi rather lekhar chesta kori karon etai nijeke express korar amar ekmatro upai…tabuo amar koushal dhore felai apnake sasroddho avinandon.
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2nd part ta besh bhalo laglo
tatka…..akdom farm-fresh jake bole….bhalo laglo
kintu akta proshno…25 bochorer kobir black-out-er obhigyota kobe holo?
Jabardast lekha..
khub-i jothaartho proshno @indranil
“…kintu akta proshno…25 bochorer kobir black-out-er obhigyota kobe holo?”
aapono moner-o maadhuri mishaaye?
aamaar chomotkaar legechhe chhoTTo kobita-duTo, baahulyo-borjito, bolishTho… dwitiyo-Taa aaro bhaalo – jeno chokher saamne bheshe uThlo.
Rana-ke obhinandon.
khub bhalo duto kobitayi….amader rojkar kotogulo sobdo proyoge eta aro jeebonto hoye uthechhe….
jharna
indranil bakshi & suirauqa,
25 bujhi khub chhotto bayos holo?!!!ardhek jiban tou par-i kore fellam…abhigyatar aar dosh kothai…tabe hain madhuri-tadhurir kono byapar nei…ota chhilo ekta filmi dukkher khatire…
apnar kobita lekhar koushol bhalo legeche kintu ami bhabchilam khete na pawar jontrona bhule snan ar ghum hoi na … porashona-o noi … “khudar rajje prithibi godyomoy … purnimar chand jyano jholsano ruti”
Expression is very weak but the concept and idea has really touchy.A poet always lives with his surroundings.You will shine.I see a new Shukanto in side you.Hope to see your more poems in Palki.
Myegh,khide ki jinis ta ami khub bhaloi bujhi…se avigyata amar achhe.’khudar rajye prithibi godyomoi’…ei quotation jhere tou sabai cholte pare na.aar ekta vikhiri chheleke ghare niye asbo…take snan ba porasona korabo,athocho khete debo na…emon bhabna…ki jani baba,amar tou kakhonoi ase ni…
kobita lekhar koushal ta thik ki,ami jani na…ekhono atota kausali hoye uthte parini aarki…ami likhi rather lekhar chesta kori karon etai nijeke express korar amar ekmatro upai…tabuo amar koushal dhore felai apnake sasroddho avinandon.
Monirul Haque,
expression je weak seta amio jani.e kobitai se jantrona prai kichhui fute othe ni…asole sabder sathe sangom sampurno hoini ekhono…