Really touched the Heart ! The name of the poem is true in all sense. The writer of this poem is known to me from my childhood since she is my elder sister. The immense talent that she beholds is perhaps less known as she is not very extrovert in spreading her talent and enlightening others with its exquisite power….power of words.
It is a very positive initiative by the coordinator of this magazine and will have all my support, in any small means, to make this a big success. My best wishes to PALKI in carrying the true bengali culture to all nooks and corners of this world.
Individually Line gulo sundor. kintu kabita tite ekti kathar sathe r ektir kono link khuje paoa jaina. past theke hotat future er assumption. sab theke boro r main bapar holo pratyek kabitar ekti galpo thake kintu ekhane tar abhas o paoa jaina. kabi edike odike ghure koekti individual line bhalo likhechen kintu puro kabita te link-er boroi ovab & galpo bolte bartho.
Aajkaal kobita lekha ta phajlamo hoye gachhe, je ja khushi likhe bole “ami kobita likhechhi” tar kono mane thakuk ba nathakuk. Akhon manusher chinta dharar kono depth nei, nijeke jahir koratay prodhan, jai houk. Ashole jara podchhe tarao to oi tai aar bhalo jinish paowa jay na,
kabita manusher suk dukkho, hasi kanna, ananda bedinar kotha bole, kabita pramer kotha bole, biroher kotha bole. mot kotha kabita jiboner kotha bole. thatswhy i like the person who like poem, write poem and admire poem..thanks@sompa sengupta for your nice verse and all poems lover.
ভাল হয়েছে। লিখতে থাকুন- আরো ভাল হবে। তবে সব ছড়া-কবিতা যে ছন্দময় হতেই হবে, তার কোন বাধ্যবাধকতা নেই। কবিতা-কাব্যের ভেতরে আবেদন ফুটিয়ে উঠানোই হলো লেখকের বড় লেখনী এবং কৃতিত্ব। বাংলাভাষায় কবিতা-কাব্যের এমন সব মর্মার্থ আছে যা অন্য কোন ভাষায় পাওয়া যাবে না, আপনার লেখনী আরো ফুটন্ত তাজা গোলাপ হয়ে উঠুক, সুভাস ছড়িয়ে যাক কম্পিউটারের স্ক্রীনে স্ক্রীনে এই প্রত্যাশায় ইংরেজী নববর্ষের শুভেচ্ছায় শেষ করছি।
TUMI BALIKA MOR
NIYE GELE MON
DIYE GELE SUDU BETHARI SRABON!
TUMAR PAANE THAKIYE
AJ AMI ANDHO
TAITO BUZINA AMI
KI VALO MONDHO!
KI ACHE TUMAR OI
RUPER O MADURITE,
KI ACHE TUMAR OI
CHOKER O CHAHONITE,
KISUY BUZI NATO AMI?
SUDUY BOZI TUMI AK MAYABBINI
JE MAYAR O HASI AJ
KORESE AMY MOHOGROSTO,
KORESE AMY POTHO_GROSTO!!!!!
Palki is among the most read online Bengali-English bilingual magazines. Palki is the one of the very few (if not only) online Bangla magazines that offer small awards based on quality and/or popularity for writing to the publication.
Palki features articles from renowned writers and publishes articles from young writers! Read and refer all of your friends and family members to Palki.
Really touched the Heart ! The name of the poem is true in all sense. The writer of this poem is known to me from my childhood since she is my elder sister. The immense talent that she beholds is perhaps less known as she is not very extrovert in spreading her talent and enlightening others with its exquisite power….power of words.
It is a very positive initiative by the coordinator of this magazine and will have all my support, in any small means, to make this a big success. My best wishes to PALKI in carrying the true bengali culture to all nooks and corners of this world.
khub sundar meyeli obhibekti. rajesh khann-ar akti dialogue : JINDIGI LAMBI NAHI, BARHI HOLI CHAHIYE.
Hi
tumi thako kothay? ami berhampore a thaki. jogajog hale khusi habo……………?
valo lekha valo lage parte sundarir mato .
Khubi valo maner kobita. Vashar bebohar durdanto. Mormosporshi sorol kobita. Khubi valo laglo apnar kobita. Tanvir/Dhaka,Bangladesh. kazitanvir007@yahoo.com
Besh valo laglo..
Khub sundar valo algche…
kobita pore khub moza laglo.
Ridoy Ridoya Rakhi
Hongsobadok hoya
tumi gala eka choli
ami somudro parer nill batha
eka eka a-e amer bacha.
Individually Line gulo sundor. kintu kabita tite ekti kathar sathe r ektir kono link khuje paoa jaina. past theke hotat future er assumption. sab theke boro r main bapar holo pratyek kabitar ekti galpo thake kintu ekhane tar abhas o paoa jaina. kabi edike odike ghure koekti individual line bhalo likhechen kintu puro kabita te link-er boroi ovab & galpo bolte bartho.
Kabita pore khub valo laglo.
Ki vabe kabita pathate hai seta janale amio pthatam. my moble no-9232475393
amar kuv valo legese,donovat
Katha jakhan Heart touch kara takhani to kabita hay.bholo hoacha
Aajkaal kobita lekha ta phajlamo hoye gachhe, je ja khushi likhe bole “ami kobita likhechhi” tar kono mane thakuk ba nathakuk. Akhon manusher chinta dharar kono depth nei, nijeke jahir koratay prodhan, jai houk. Ashole jara podchhe tarao to oi tai aar bhalo jinish paowa jay na,
khub valo laglo
kov sundor kobita.thanx
My best wishes to U.
apnar kobita ta porlam
khub bhalo laglo
ekdom mon chuye gelo !!
Superb….mind blowing….keep it up…wish u all the best….
DIDI CHOMOTKAR LIKHECHEN.
Didi,
Tomar kobita amar khub valo lagca……
sattie somoi khub kom.
hridoi tai ba ki? kothai thake se?
tai hridoyei thakuk!!!!!!!
কবিতা বেশ লাগছে । তবে ভালোর তো শেষ নেই ।
আমার মনে হয় নতুন কিছু না লিখতে পারলে কবিকে কেউ মনে রাখবে না । আরো
নতুন ভাবে লিখুন ।
dear tumar kobita ama khob valo lagse. tume aro kobita lekho, sodo amader jonno. thanks dear.
good idea & expression
hi kobi kobita neye beche takho.
amer kub valo lagse apneder kobitha
kabita manusher suk dukkho, hasi kanna, ananda bedinar kotha bole, kabita pramer kotha bole, biroher kotha bole. mot kotha kabita jiboner kotha bole. thatswhy i like the person who like poem, write poem and admire poem..thanks@sompa sengupta for your nice verse and all poems lover.
Khub bhalo laglo
খুব ভাল হয়েছে। আরো ভাল যে হতে হবে।
bhater lekha bondho korun…
Apnake Thanks
Apnar Kobita amar kache bhalo legacha
very bad poem
very balo
apnar khobitata amr hridoy soyaca,
chhotto sundor poddo. thanx.
Vasha, Bangla Vasha…/ Vasha’r chobi aaka jaina ! / K-Boleche Jaina ? Amon ekta Kobita vasha’r Chobi Noi ki?????
kotodin bosha hoyna kagoj r r saye kolomta niye ,jano keno jani tumar shopner sathe amar doshopnotaw mishe jete chai,je shopnota kokhono sotti hobar noy .anaek chasta koreo tumar say nirbichar shopner sathe maniye nite parlam na tai hal chere dilam .janina tate ami sukhe hote parbo ki na .jodi sukhi sokhi hoi taholeamar say sukhtake bhaga bhagi kora jonno tomake dakbo,r jodi dukher sagore bhashi tahole hoyto tumi jante parbe na ,ami ekai bohon korbo say dukher bahon……….hridoy theke bolchi
Ami jake bhalobashi say prithibir sera sondori
manush keno eto nishthur hoy bolte paro ,prithibite sobay ache sobar chinta cetonai kebol ami achi je sodho tumar kotha vhabe ,tumake niye vhabe,hridoyer protiti spondon theke sodho tumake chai,anek beshi shopno dekhechilam tumake niye ,tai na bojhe na jene tumake anek bhalobeshe chilam ,kinto bhabini say shopno ta amar jiboner kal hoye darabe,anek bhalobeshe chi tumake hoyto tumio,kinto tumar bhalobashai hoyto kono sotti chilona je karone amar shopnota bhenge chormar hoye geche,ekdin hoyto janbe say shopner karone amar jiboner alo nibhe geche,hoyto aj tumi eka acho kinto ekdin tumar jiboner sukh dekhe gota prithibi ershai jolche,ami sobsomoy cai tumi bhalo thako tai tumar jonno anek kichoi korechi janina tumake sob kicho dite perechikina tabo bolbo ami ja korechi tumar jonno hoyto tumar kacher manushtao eto kicho korbena ,r keno korechi jano,karon ektai ami tumake anek bhalobashi, sodho bhalobashi bolle vhol hobe amar jiboner anek besi
ভাল হয়েছে। লিখতে থাকুন- আরো ভাল হবে। তবে সব ছড়া-কবিতা যে ছন্দময় হতেই হবে, তার কোন বাধ্যবাধকতা নেই। কবিতা-কাব্যের ভেতরে আবেদন ফুটিয়ে উঠানোই হলো লেখকের বড় লেখনী এবং কৃতিত্ব। বাংলাভাষায় কবিতা-কাব্যের এমন সব মর্মার্থ আছে যা অন্য কোন ভাষায় পাওয়া যাবে না, আপনার লেখনী আরো ফুটন্ত তাজা গোলাপ হয়ে উঠুক, সুভাস ছড়িয়ে যাক কম্পিউটারের স্ক্রীনে স্ক্রীনে এই প্রত্যাশায় ইংরেজী নববর্ষের শুভেচ্ছায় শেষ করছি।
BALIKA
TUMI BALIKA MOR
NIYE GELE MON
DIYE GELE SUDU BETHARI SRABON!
TUMAR PAANE THAKIYE
AJ AMI ANDHO
TAITO BUZINA AMI
KI VALO MONDHO!
KI ACHE TUMAR OI
RUPER O MADURITE,
KI ACHE TUMAR OI
CHOKER O CHAHONITE,
KISUY BUZI NATO AMI?
SUDUY BOZI TUMI AK MAYABBINI
JE MAYAR O HASI AJ
KORESE AMY MOHOGROSTO,
KORESE AMY POTHO_GROSTO!!!!!