Great work. Loved the rhythm and the meter, great imagery as well. ‘b-a-r-o-t-a’ is fine… but ‘hem’ would probably be ‘heem’. But my question is different: Is this an ode to a cottage? Or to a long-lost love? Why cottage?
A mechanical Engineer writes poem sound fantastic.But there are similarities because a poet creates and an engineer builds both creator.
I appreciate your writings and expect more.
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Perfect Chondo. “Barota” word tate amar ektu osubidhe holo…keno jiggasa korle explain korbo.. khub sabolil lekha. Aar lekha chai bhobissote.
khub sposhto lekha…barota ta bodhoy “barta” hobe…ota recite er belay b-a-r-o-t-a spell korte hobe hoyto….ar sheshtay “hem” ektu confused…! ota ki “hiim” hobe….
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Great work. Loved the rhythm and the meter, great imagery as well. ‘b-a-r-o-t-a’ is fine… but ‘hem’ would probably be ‘heem’. But my question is different: Is this an ode to a cottage? Or to a long-lost love? Why cottage?
barta bifol hole barota-i hoye jaay
ankan, asubidheTa keno janaben.
hiim noy hem habe, hem ortho sona…
ar, krishna cottage bole ekTa cinema beriyechhilo 2003-4 nagad. isha kopikar chhilo, bhut hoye premiker punorjonme hana dichchilo
A mechanical Engineer writes poem sound fantastic.But there are similarities because a poet creates and an engineer builds both creator.
I appreciate your writings and expect more.