I DO’NT UNDERSTSND WHY THE WRITTER IS IN HURRY TO END THE STORY?CAN SHE EVER READ THE STORY TWICE? GOLPAR SURU TA SUNDOR BUT ENDING ……………I DONOT EXPRESS HOW BAD IT IS.
The story is really a masterpiece for a fresher like the author. I agree with SUIRUAQA, A Film director should act on a real life story like this. All the Best!
This is a very well authored story, looks like almost real life one. However, the actual marriage sequence at the end could have been little better developed and elaborated. It does leave a feeling that the ‘All well that ends well’ aspect was rather hurried.
Overall it is a great composition and could be filmed into a good movie.
the prime object of a story is to drag out the relevance with the real life which is preset in your story.good keep up.your first attempt to write a story shows that you have potential.try hard on it.you may have a bright career in this field.
Na anekdin par ekta bhalo choto galpo porlam. jani na ba mone nei kar kache sune chilam j choto galpo holo bangla sahityer asol sanchalok. Akdom thik thak end. shes hoyeu jeno holo na sesh. apnake anek dhonnobad ato sundor kore galpo ta bedhe rakhar janey puro ta jeno chokher samne realise korte parlam. abar abar anek buk vara bhalo basa janai r bhagobaner kache parthona kori jeno apni bhalo thaken sustho thaken.
Sorry for the procastination in replying to all your comments…prothomei shobai key onek dhonyobad janachhi amar golpo porbar jonno. Jader golpo r ending ta ba onno kichu bhalo lageni tader comments ami nioshchoi money raakhbo, jodi kothao incorporate kora jay…ar jader bhalo legechey tader asha kori bhobishyotey aro bhalo lekha upohar ditey parbo.
anekdin par ekta bhalo choto galpo porlam. puro ta jeno chokher samne realise korte parlam. sab thik thak chilo but sesh ta taratari sesh korte hobe bole monehoy sesh korte holo… aditya-r sange tar samparko ta biye parjanto galo ki kore ta jante parle khusi hotam…
ami pesonaly ei galpotar sange amar parichito ekjaner jiboner mil khuje payecho…
bhalo theko, sabai ke bhalo rekho… erakami kichu galper modhe diye…
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mishTi galpo. easily ekTaa cinema koraa jete paare.
besh ekta chobi fute utheche…
I DO’NT UNDERSTSND WHY THE WRITTER IS IN HURRY TO END THE STORY?CAN SHE EVER READ THE STORY TWICE? GOLPAR SURU TA SUNDOR BUT ENDING ……………I DONOT EXPRESS HOW BAD IT IS.
The story is really a masterpiece for a fresher like the author. I agree with SUIRUAQA, A Film director should act on a real life story like this. All the Best!
This is a very well authored story, looks like almost real life one. However, the actual marriage sequence at the end could have been little better developed and elaborated. It does leave a feeling that the ‘All well that ends well’ aspect was rather hurried.
Overall it is a great composition and could be filmed into a good movie.
the prime object of a story is to drag out the relevance with the real life which is preset in your story.good keep up.your first attempt to write a story shows that you have potential.try hard on it.you may have a bright career in this field.
after reading this story i came to know that you can write story also???????????????????????????????????
bhalo legeche.
aro golpo asha kori.
seshtay trhiller cheshta korte giye romantic byaparta hariye gache.
life is short, and every thing happen very fast. still, a writer should try give all the plesures to the readers in some few pages.
khub simple kintu bes valo laglo golpota pore.anyway all the best for your next story.
apnar lekha pore valo laglo, asole khub khub valo lekhechen. asha kori lekhalekhita aro valobabe continue korben. obos-shoi continue korben.
Darun Likecho, Ses ta seser matoi hoyeche. Bhalo golper etai credit je, Galpo sesh holeo mone hoi r ektu hole bhalo hoto.
nice story…sweet….bt aditto er beparta arektu likle aro moja pawa jeto….
Sesh ta arektu elaborate kore likhle bhalo lagto…….
khuuuuuub bhalo laglo—sesh ta ekdam chhoto golper jonno appropriate–aapnake onek onek shubhechha–aro bhalo bhalo likhben–
Na anekdin par ekta bhalo choto galpo porlam. jani na ba mone nei kar kache sune chilam j choto galpo holo bangla sahityer asol sanchalok. Akdom thik thak end. shes hoyeu jeno holo na sesh. apnake anek dhonnobad ato sundor kore galpo ta bedhe rakhar janey puro ta jeno chokher samne realise korte parlam. abar abar anek buk vara bhalo basa janai r bhagobaner kache parthona kori jeno apni bhalo thaken sustho thaken.
Sorry for the procastination in replying to all your comments…prothomei shobai key onek dhonyobad janachhi amar golpo porbar jonno. Jader golpo r ending ta ba onno kichu bhalo lageni tader comments ami nioshchoi money raakhbo, jodi kothao incorporate kora jay…ar jader bhalo legechey tader asha kori bhobishyotey aro bhalo lekha upohar ditey parbo.
kichhu portei parlam na – je kono bhalo / mando bolbo ba samalochana korbo.
anekdin par ekta bhalo choto galpo porlam. puro ta jeno chokher samne realise korte parlam. sab thik thak chilo but sesh ta taratari sesh korte hobe bole monehoy sesh korte holo… aditya-r sange tar samparko ta biye parjanto galo ki kore ta jante parle khusi hotam…
ami pesonaly ei galpotar sange amar parichito ekjaner jiboner mil khuje payecho…
bhalo theko, sabai ke bhalo rekho… erakami kichu galper modhe diye…
amar bhari balurghat amar nam indra ami ey golpolo niye akti cenema toyri korbo
The story was good but, the end was not so good.
bes valo , abstract story , nijer
mon diea bujhe nite hoy.
thanks
ami imran khulnai thaki, pujakula, ata khub sundor golpo, vvvveeeeeeerrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy sweet.
khub sundor ekta story.
Ki likbo bojta parci na
SORRY!portei parlam na.tai,NO COMMENTS.