I DO’NT UNDERSTSND WHY THE WRITTER IS IN HURRY TO END THE STORY?CAN SHE EVER READ THE STORY TWICE? GOLPAR SURU TA SUNDOR BUT ENDING ……………I DONOT EXPRESS HOW BAD IT IS.
The story is really a masterpiece for a fresher like the author. I agree with SUIRUAQA, A Film director should act on a real life story like this. All the Best!
This is a very well authored story, looks like almost real life one. However, the actual marriage sequence at the end could have been little better developed and elaborated. It does leave a feeling that the ‘All well that ends well’ aspect was rather hurried.
Overall it is a great composition and could be filmed into a good movie.
the prime object of a story is to drag out the relevance with the real life which is preset in your story.good keep up.your first attempt to write a story shows that you have potential.try hard on it.you may have a bright career in this field.
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Bengali Translation Competition in the category of Short Story
On the occasion of its First Anniversary, CHARCHA the webzine pioneer of
its kind is proud to invite submissions for a Bengali Translation Competition in the category of Short Story. The last date of submission is April 30, 2009. Three selected stories will be
published in July 2009 isue of CHARCHA. Click
here for details.
mishTi galpo. easily ekTaa cinema koraa jete paare.
besh ekta chobi fute utheche…
I DO’NT UNDERSTSND WHY THE WRITTER IS IN HURRY TO END THE STORY?CAN SHE EVER READ THE STORY TWICE? GOLPAR SURU TA SUNDOR BUT ENDING ……………I DONOT EXPRESS HOW BAD IT IS.
The story is really a masterpiece for a fresher like the author. I agree with SUIRUAQA, A Film director should act on a real life story like this. All the Best!
This is a very well authored story, looks like almost real life one. However, the actual marriage sequence at the end could have been little better developed and elaborated. It does leave a feeling that the ‘All well that ends well’ aspect was rather hurried.
Overall it is a great composition and could be filmed into a good movie.
the prime object of a story is to drag out the relevance with the real life which is preset in your story.good keep up.your first attempt to write a story shows that you have potential.try hard on it.you may have a bright career in this field.
after reading this story i came to know that you can write story also???????????????????????????????????
bhalo legeche.
aro golpo asha kori.
seshtay trhiller cheshta korte giye romantic byaparta hariye gache.
life is short, and every thing happen very fast. still, a writer should try give all the plesures to the readers in some few pages.
khub simple kintu bes valo laglo golpota pore.anyway all the best for your next story.
apnar lekha pore valo laglo, asole khub khub valo lekhechen. asha kori lekhalekhita aro valobabe continue korben. obos-shoi continue korben.
Darun Likecho, Ses ta seser matoi hoyeche. Bhalo golper etai credit je, Galpo sesh holeo mone hoi r ektu hole bhalo hoto.