Hemantara Esechilo Eka Eka-Bengali Poem by Ramit Dey
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It’s an absolute beauty…aar kichhu bolte parchhina…
â Bakto hok jibonero joy,
Bakto hok toma majhe
asimero ciro besmoyâ
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I’m really proud of you.
Ramit,
Apnar lekha pore khub bhalo laglo; “chunye thako, chunye thako tumi omudrito hemanta” … osadharon!
Tomar ekekta kobita ekekta hemanter aagamoni sur…ekbar porle bar bar porte ichhe kore…ashteprishthe dhore rakhte chai oi bhalo laga hemanta…chhander aaborte spandamay nrityer tale tale samudrer tire pouchhe diyechhe jeeboner jhilik, samne rekhe bishal jeejon bhumi…
anobadyo!kothao kothao jibananander anubhutiloker sathe tomar anubhutir asadharon mil.koyekta metaphor er byabohar bishesh kore mon chhuye jay:’posha dirghaswash’,'anugata andhar’ ‘silajatu ichhe’,'lakkhichhara sukh’ ‘boba shunyota’ ‘thyatlano ushnota’ ‘taral jantrana’, ‘danabhanga ratrir niswas’ ‘lomotha sheet’…chhoto sabdoguchha,kintu prakash kare anek gabhir kichhu.sobseshe boli,tomar ei line tay ‘natun lekhagulo saragaye kanta futiye dey phoenix pratiksha’ shakespeare er ekta upama mone koriye dey jekhane tini ekta natun kobitar sristir songe prasutijantrnar(ebong ekisathe nabajatoker janmo deyoar swargiyo anubhuti)tulona korechhen.bhishan bhishan bhalo likhechho.
Porlam, bar bar porlam kintu kichui bujhlam na. a tuku sudhu bujhlam kichu sundor sobder mayajal rochona hoeche.
Ramit……sudhu boli…OBHIBHUTO!!…osadharon kabbyochitron.
saalam..
mishti golpo..
Enchanting read!!!
“tumi tto jano jevabe puriyecho
sevabei jwole pure achi |
kaukei bolte parina
shudhu obadhya ghum ke chenate pari
ek buk pora gondho…. ”
sottie…line gulo narra diye gelo..
will be nice to recite though…a man seeks food,clothes and shelter…and then a bit of security…which is may be insurance…though insurance companies are confused about their own securities…its a game of statistics…
enough…thereafter a man seeks recognition…here stands romit…banglar aato seba romit korechho…tai ami r bishes sebay broti na holeo chale…
a bit rude…isnt he?
sundor bhasha, kintu boddo dirgho… ektu songkhipto hole bhalo lage…
It is an absolute privilege to read your poems. Keep it up….onekdin pore akjon notun kobi khuje pelam….