Comments on: Phera-Bengali Short Story by Abhik Das

By: shaan

shaan — Wed, 03 Feb 2010 13:47:32 +0000

kali-kolom diye ekta asomvob valo chhobi aka hoyechhe. pore sotti valo laglo…nijer school life ta dola diye gelo moner ek kone. tobe bakyo gulo kothao kothao boro r overlapping na hole khub valo hoto. shuvechha roilo tomar jonyo.

By: raju

raju — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 22:25:25 +0000

eita thik kotha… lekha ta bhalo tobe ektu boro hoye geche… porer bar aro bhalo lekha chai

By: Suvendu Das

Suvendu Das — Sun, 10 Jan 2010 07:45:09 +0000

abhik,

likhechho bhalo…galper taanta thik thak…ami bole narrate na korle khusi hotam…chhobita kali kalom e aankte perechho…bakko gulo ro chhoto hole ro bhalo hoto…ei re bodh hoy ektu beshi likhe phellam…jaak ge…skill r career?…nah…jibon er cheye sotti onek baro…r etai uchcharon kori …je kono shilpo madhdhomme…galpo…kobitay…cinemay…jar jaamon chal…likho…themo na…ami sudhoo pori…r…pori…

By: Anindita

Anindita — Thu, 31 Dec 2009 09:35:05 +0000

Abhik

tomar golpo pore amar abar bhisonbhabe nijer school gulote giye giye smriti romonthon korte ichche korche . bes kichu school e porechi bibhinno jaaygaay , kothay 6 maas kothao 3 yrs …sobgulotei jete ichche kore . aaj abar korche .

jibone cholaar pothe to kotoi 5 yrs 6 yrs aase kintu school life er bochorgulor kono tulona hoyna , protidin notun jinis sekha , koto bondhu , koto teacher , koto rokomer koto romancho ….

kintu dukhkher bishoy school e thakakalin bujhte parini je jiboner best period er modhdhye diye cholechi , jodi jantaam tahole somosto bondhu jader koto kauke helaay hariyechi tader konobhabei hariye jete ditam na .

Anindita
New Jersey

By: Avik Ghosh

Avik Ghosh — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 06:51:52 +0000

Hmm. Khub valo likhechis. Tor jonno amar o khanik khon er jonno bhandarhati school e phire jaowa holo.

11 er physics…! & sudhu physics i j science noi, eta hoito amra ak tu deri te bujhechilum. Kintu physics amra darun enjoy korechilum. Ki bol.

tor golper jonno, onek onek din bade, purono din gulo abar mone porche..

khub sundor..

By: Abhik Das

Abhik Das — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 12:46:39 +0000

Thank you Vidhita,

ami chesta korbo aro bhalo lekhar.

subhechcha niyo.

Abhik

By: Vidhita Debnath

Vidhita Debnath — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 17:59:36 +0000

Abhik,

tomar golpota pore khoob anondo pelam,
amar nijer school jiboner kotha mone pore gelo. erokom aro golpo pabo tomar kach theke ei ashay roilam.
subheccha niyo

Vidhita,
Canada

By: ARPITA DATTA

ARPITA DATTA — Tue, 03 Nov 2009 14:26:42 +0000

Ami to agei bolechi…..tao abar bolchi khub sundor……

By: Ankan Basu

Ankan Basu — Tue, 03 Nov 2009 02:09:03 +0000

Nice piece of work my friend.

By: Kallol

Kallol — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 07:02:00 +0000

Really great!! And Abhik da, you know I had read it many days before but couldn’t prevent myself going thru once again.